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angry_nerd_rock's picture
SEATTLE
Oct 2004
10 years ago

i wrote this song and i need to hear someone else's opinion then my friends cuz we have to perform it soon and i dont wanna play some gay-ass song. The sound is kinda like KITTIE MEETS EVENESCENCE, so try to imagine that and the beginning starts out with a heavy bass riff.

You paint a pretty picture
Of your suar-coated world
Treat me like I'm different
Try to teach me what you've heard
But I figured it out the hard way
Cuz nothing is what it seems
I can't put down the needle
It's like it's callin after me
IT WON'T LET GO!

WAKE UP!
And open your eyes
WAKE UP!
It's all a big lie
WAKE UP!
Your wasting your time
WAKE UP!
WAKE UP!

My life's too short to waist it with you
Your taking up my time
I don't need to take this **** from you
Just give me back what's mine
But before I go I'de like to say something
Just so you will know
You told me it was wrong to spread my wings
You were afraid to let me go

You kill the thoughts
If you kill the man
Only to find
His thoughts will rise again

RIG:
Fender Delux HH strat Guitar
Crate 20Watt
Fostex digital 8-track
Squire P-Series Bass

angry_nerd_rock's picture
SEATTLE
Oct 2004
10 years ago

thanx, i'll try to work with that.

You kill the thoughts
If you kill the man
Only to find
His thoughts will rise again

RIG:
Fender Delux HH strat Guitar
Crate 20Watt
Fostex digital 8-track
Squire P-Series Bass

Talent?!'s picture
Merseyside, U.K.
Aug 2003
2 years ago

I'm pretty sure Goldfinger released a song with a similar chorus

-You are now breathing manually.
Gear

Quote:

Originally posted by thelabia {regarding glow in the dark furbies}
WOW!!! That'd rock!
Or you could give them spandex and facepaint and use the enclosure to hold Illegal furbie cage matches...
Theres never a dull moment with an empty krank head...

Quote:

Originally posted by Motorhead
If crack made a noise then the X2N would make the same noise.

angry_nerd_rock's picture
SEATTLE
Oct 2004
10 years ago

I don't listin to Goldfinger so i wouldn't know that.

You kill the thoughts
If you kill the man
Only to find
His thoughts will rise again

RIG:
Fender Delux HH strat Guitar
Crate 20Watt
Fostex digital 8-track
Squire P-Series Bass

haiku_suicide's picture
Michigan
Apr 2004
6 years ago

Those lyrics are quite emo, IMO. Not really my thing, but heh, you'll probably get some p*ssy. Good luck at your show :D

I bomb the mic like a fascist, Mussolini
comin' through with no remorse, from the dark you won't see me.
Rise up from the sea like a godzilla
straight up through your mind with my armour plated drilla.
I don't give a f*ck what you think about this sh*t, ain't
in it for the money never out to make a hit.
If you can't take it like I said get a grip
'cause I'm here to f*cking stay like the warts on your ****.

YOuAre's picture
Oct 2003
7 years ago

from the gibson website

lyrics: wasted time between solos.

I'm a dead man....walking.....

angry_nerd_rock's picture
SEATTLE
Oct 2004
10 years ago

...i musta missed that last time i was on there......i've never heard that before.

....i don't really like the last verse so instead of it being :
But before i go I'de like to say something
Just so you will know
You told me it was wrong to spread my wings
You were afraid to let me go

i changed it to :
Everytime i turn it's always there
It's driving me insane
Parinoid voices in my head
Keep tellin me i'm to blame

You kill the thoughts
If you kill the man
Only to find
His thoughts will rise again

RIG:
Fender Delux HH strat Guitar
Crate 20Watt
Fostex digital 8-track
Squire P-Series Bass

kurtdaniel's picture
Dec 2010
5 years ago
Originally Posted by angry_nerd_rock

i wrote this song and i need to hear someone else's opinion then my friends cuz we have to perform it soon and i dont wanna play some gay-ass song. The sound is kinda like KITTIE MEETS EVENESCENCE, so try to imagine that and the beginning starts out with a heavy bass riff.

You paint a pretty picture
Of your suar-coated world
Treat me like I'm different
Try to teach me what you've heard
But I figured it out the hard way
Cuz nothing is what it seems
I can't put down the needle
It's like it's callin after me
IT WON'T LET GO!

WAKE UP!
And open your eyes
WAKE UP!
It's all a big lie
WAKE UP!
Your wasting your time
WAKE UP!
WAKE UP!

My life's too short to waist it with you
Your taking up my time
I don't need to take this **** from you
Just give me back what's mine
But before I go I'de like to say something
Just so you will know
You told me it was wrong to spread my wings
You were afraid to let me go

nice lyrics!! have you put some melody onto it? I can see from this one that you really got the talent to write song..

Charles_2's picture
Onalaska, Texas
Nov 2012
2 years ago

Anything sounds good with the right melody.